I noticed this after writing Sharkbait's Revenge. I tried to make sure that all of the paragraphs were useful to go to if you made the correct choices to go with them. However, that was never going to work out and there are some decisions that were worse than others. For example, when you are breaking into a house, you have to face several guards. Going through the middle is worse than sneaking around the edge of the house.
What happened was, when I was playing through my Windhammer entry, I only focused on the optimal routes which means that I missed certain things, like the correct paragraph numbers. I had forgotten that other people would not know that they were bad choices and make them. I just made the best choices and made sure that they worked.
How have I reduced this problem?
Check all of the options: Yes - just having to spend some more time being more thorough would solve most of the problems.
Get someone else to read it: This other person has no idea what the successful route should be, so they will make all kinds of suboptimal decisions and tell you if they work. Also, you can ask them if they can tell if they know which route is the best one based on how much effort they think has been put in the paragraph.
Some people care less about victory and more about the story and exploration. Some players are probably just sadists and want to get their player killed in increasingly bizarre ways.
All of these player types will be disappointed if they have to walk through several non-descript rooms to a two line death paragraph. The bad routes and failures should be just as entertaining.
Beneath Nightmare Castle and Creature of Havoc nail this idea.
Also, from a gaming point of view, a player will have no way of working out if this is the optimal route or not based on the amount of effort put into the paragraphs.
So there we are. Remember that even if a route is destined for failure, it still deserves your attention.
'Creature of Havoc' is an interesting example - it is probably the definitive gamebook that has exactly ONE correct route to succeed. A route that took me several years to find, by the by - that whole mislabelled secret door option didn't help. But yes, so much attention is paid to the death routes that there's really no clear indication of which route is the right one. It's still one of my favourite Fighting Fantasy books.ReplyDelete
You could also make a case for gamebooks occasionally putting TOO MUCH emphasis on routes that are destined for failure. Take the example of Lone Wolf 3: The Caverns of Kalte. Towards the end of the book it devotes a good 50 paragraphs (out of 350) to a 'certain death' route. Yes, that's attention to detail... but you wonder if the 'main adventure' might have benefitted from an extra 50 paragraphs.
Okay, technically that's not a DEATH route - it's the only instance in the Lone Wolf books where you can actually survive the adventure even if you fail in your quest (to bring Vonotar the Traitor to justice, in this case). Though you're still not allowed to proceed to Book 4, apparently - too many story inconsistencies when you run into Vonotar again in Book 11.
Never even got past the dungeon of creature of havoc : )ReplyDelete