My system

Hello gamebookers.  Have you ordered your ticket yet?

Just a quick one to say that I have changed my gamebook system to make it more of a dungeon crawl friendly system.  The system did not suit the type of gamebook that I wanted to produce.  However, I have made another new system that I am keeping under wraps for the moment and that suits the type of gamebook that I wanted.  However, here is the old system in all its glory.  I feel that anything else I do to it will just be aimless picking and the only way to improve it now would be to test it on a scenario.

Tell me what you think!